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1. Variety of shots?
2. Mise-en-scene considered enough
3. Editing - pace? transitions? continuity editing?
4. sound - appropriate? voice over? music? atmosphere?
5. What does the sequence tell you about the whole film? Characters? Narrative? Genre?


There was a variety of camera shots
the opening sequence was edited good and was well thought out
the music was related to the genre and was tight
liked how they done the names
mise en scene could be improved with the live action-where are they? who? why chasing?
like final bit where paper jimmy intorduces himself

Yes, there was a good variety
No costumes but props were good
Well edited introduction with fluid stopmotion
Good music, not alot of voice.
Yes

There were lots of camera shots
props have been used and colour has been considered.
The sequence is flowing with the continuity editing
The soundtrack is appropriate for the film and works to build the atmosphere.
it ques an idea about the main characters and nearly gives away what the film is about, the right amount of clues.

Yes, they were good.
yes many characters and colours (variety)
Continuity editing is good, flows well, good editing on stopmotion.
Reall suitable music, works well with narrative.
yes, about boy who is bullied so creates character - paper jimmy. Gives ideas about characters.

A wide variety of shots.
Music well suited to the film.
Easily identifiable as a kids film.
very good start and finish